ARC Review by Annie: Different Dynamics by Tamir Drake
Richard doesn’t mind being an omega; all he cares about is playing good hockey, even though it means ignoring the media that tries to rip him apart for it. They don’t think omegas should be allowed on the ice, but he gets along fine. He’s team captain. He can play with the best of them.
The one sticking point is his heats; Richard might be on suppressants, but he’s one of the unlucky ones who still gets a heat every four months or so. They suck to deal with, especially alone, but seeking out a heat partner isn’t an option. The PR nightmare alone keeps him from any kind of hook-up. He can’t risk it. Hockey is all he’s got.
When Richard’s heat comes early while his team is on a roadie, teammate and best friend James helps him out of a bad situation. Tired of hurting, Richard decides it’s better not to go it alone. And James is safe and warm; he’s a great alpha who knows just what Richard needs. When Richard also imprints on big, bad rival player, Dmitry Sokolov? There’s sweet comfort in a three-way with lots of knotting and dirty talk.
Richard might be on cloud nine.
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His hockey team was in the middle of a roadie when Richard woke up feeling painful and tender and thought, Fuck. His heat was early.
It wasn’t supposed to happen; being on suppressants meant his heats should come every four months instead of every thirty days, and they were supposed to be timed out. This one was due next week, when he’d be back home with two days off skating to at least deal with it. The first forty-eight hours, for him, was always the worst part. Yeah, he’d still have interviews and charity events in the downtime, but with the libido inhibitor and odor-blockers, he’d always been able to manage.
There was nothing for it now. He had practice and then the game—at least it was an afternoon game—so he sucked it up and dug out the briefs with their sewn-in pocket for absorption pads that, luckily, he always took with him just in case. He also popped a couple ibuprofen to try to ward off the pain he knew was coming. With any luck, he’d be able to get through practice and the game, and then have the night and tomorrow morning to curl up under his covers, suffer, and hate himself.
Every omega’s heat was different. Some had it so easy they didn’t have to bother with suppressants. Some had a partner, or they’d find one to help them through their heat, which could last between three days and nine. Others went on suppressants and were in the lucky camp of not having to ever deal with heats.
Richard had never been lucky. He had an implant that kept his heats as regulated as possible. But when he did get them, the onset was sudden and painful, especially the first two days—and they lasted for seven. His insides felt like they were burning up, and on top of the pain, he had to deal with nausea. Heats supposedly felt good when you had a partner to help you through them.
Richard wouldn’t know. He’d been on libido inhibitors since he was twelve. And while heat and sex were different things, he was the only omega playing in the NHL. He had to be careful, and that meant not letting anyone get close enough to know…
He was already under constant media scrutiny because he was captain of his team. And playing as an omega? Letting people know he had heats, period, was a risk. He’d heard it all before when he’d gone first in the draft:
A detriment to the team.
What kind of player has a hair trigger?
Can he even play?
He’d gotten the implant ages ago, had it updated every two years like clockwork, sucked up the pain, and pretended he was one of the lucky ones who didn’t go through heats at all.
I requested this one from NineStar Press because I saw it featured hockey and I also was in the mood for an a/b/o story. It wasn’t as good as I thought it would be.
It’s just too short and the whole thing felt too rushed. I really think this would have worked better as a novella or even a novel length story because the bones were there. It just needed a lot of fleshing out in my opinion.
Because of the length the narration felt kind of jumpy.
We never really get to know either of the characters because the story pretty much jumps from one sex scene to the next. This might be perfect for some readers, but it’s not my jam. I want to feel the connection and chemistry between the MC’s. While sex scenes can be a good tool to give the readers a sense of who the characters are, I didn’t feel like it worked in Different Dynamics. I just wanted more. More of the relationship between each of the characters, more about the characters themselves, more “every day life” and dammit, more hockey too!
The blurb makes it seem like there’s a lot of hockey in the story, but it doesn’t feature that much in the story itself.
After all the criticism though, I have to say that I still kind of liked it. It was good as a filler inbetween books because it’s really not long; but I probably wouldn’t read it again.
Trigger Warning for sexual assault at the beginning of the story.
Tamir has the tendency to write feelings into everything, no matter how filthy. He’s not all that sorry about it.
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Genre: Contemporary Genre: Erotica Genre: Paranormal Orientation: Bisexual Orientation: Gay Orientation: Pansexual Pairing: M/M Pairing: M/M/M Publisher: Nine Star Press Review Short Story Tag: Friends to Lovers Tag: Sports Different Dynamics Tamir Drake
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